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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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On SA5 I have a hard time following the narrative. There are too much weird angles and compositions that remind me of those 90's Marvel pages where you have so much happening you don't really get what's going on.
I also feel the transition of action betwen panels is too hasty. For example panel 2 kicking dudes and panel 3 already up with somebody on cuffs going out of the place. The action seems to happen in cut frames like pictures. Having said this I understand this is most probably a writing issue.